Thursday, November 08, 2012

Guest Post: Janet S. Fox on Core Emotions and Writing from the Heart

By Janet S. Fox
for Cynthia Leitich Smith's Cynsations

Janet being "hooded" by VCFA faculty member Julie Larios
When I was a student at Vermont College of Fine Arts I had the privilege of listening to Marion Dane Bauer’s retirement lecture. She said she’d discovered that a core emotion formed in her childhood resided at the heart of all her stories. In her case, abandonment was her core emotion; every one of her stories addressed the fear of abandonment or rescue from abandonment.

I’ve thought about this lecture a lot, thinking through and around the issue of my own core emotion.

Our best writing comes when we write from the heart: when we open our souls and expose our deepest feelings – that’s when we give our readers the freedom to feel empathy and catharsis and to revel in insight.

So what, I’ve asked myself (going on three years), what is my core emotion?

Janet (right) with her dad and sister.
My own childhood was somewhat idyllic.


My favorite childhood reading (like C.S. Lewis’s Narnia series) didn’t offer immediate hints.

Not so long ago, as I was wrapping up the final edits of my new release, Sirens (Speak/Penguin, 2012), I found it.

No, I’m not going to just come out and tell you. But here are some hints.

When I was young my parents sent me to dancing school. I learned to dance, but mostly I learned how to be a wallflower. It wasn’t until late in high school when I learned to let go and dance.

I was struck during the years we lived in Texas when younger people (particularly younger men) addressed me politely as “ma’am.” I tried to teach it to my son; it was consummate verbal charm. Why, then, did it grate on my nerves?

I’ve built four houses over my lifetime (including designing three), so I know a thing or two about building. Once, I deselected a general contractor who insisted that I knew nothing about construction and derisively called me the “little lady.”

Are you getting a picture here?

Even if you are, what the heck does this have to do with writing?

My core emotion, I’ve come to realize, revolves around empowerment. It particularly centers on the power – or the powerlessness – of girls and women.

Through most of human history, and throughout much of the world today, women have served a subordinate function to the roles of men. Abused, subjugated, prevented from marrying for love, prevented from voting, forced to bear children, forced out of education – girls and women were and are often powerless to change their condition. Even when society elevated women to polite deference (“ma’am”) they were bound in strangling corsets and married off.


Somewhere along the way - and I credit my parents here, as well as Lucy Pevensie, who did provide an example after all – I was given to know that I had the power to make my own choices.

But also somewhere along the way I was given the feeling that I didn’t really have that power except by accident of birth.

Now we get to writing. I give all of my characters, male or female, young or old, the choice to become powerful. Not all of us in life have the chance to grasp power; but when we do we all have the choice. By letting my characters understand that they can take charge of their particular circumstance I release my own heartfelt belief that we should all have that choice, and that the action of reaching out and taking control is brave, often dangerous, but also extraordinary.

That’s the heart of my matter.

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8 comments:

LinWash said...

Janet, you hit me where I live. My beta reader brought up this issue in my WIP--that my heroine is too passive and needs to be empowered. So I really appreciate what you said here.

Varsha Bajaj said...

Janet,
i love this post. It's made me think and opened floodgates of both thoughts and emotions.

Laurina said...

Thank you Cynthia and Janet! I'm a reader, not a writer and empowrment is an issue that resonates with me.

Janet Fox said...

Lin and Varsha - thank you so much for your comments. It means so much to me that my post touched you both!

Cyn - You are so sweet to host me here. Hugs, and I can't wait to read Feral Nights! :)

Kim Taylor-DiLeva said...

Marion Dane Bauer is an AMAZING speaker and presenter for aspiring authors and I love what you've shared here about what she said about core emotion. I had the opportunity to hear her speak on Writing Successful Picture Books and on Voice through Writing for Children Live. She is so professional and amazingly informative. What a gift that you were able to hear her retirement speech! Thank you for sharing this!

Janet Fox said...

Laurina - Thank you. I hope that reading about empowerment is also an inspiration for you! hugs -

Janet Fox said...

Thanks, Kim. It was actually listening to Marion on your excellent webinar that inspired me to pursue this again - I was so struck by her retirement lecture, and when she repeated the idea recently it clicked in me. So thank you!!

mima said...

Hi Janet,
Loved Marion's lecture, and am glad to be reminded of it through your awesome post. I, too, have thought of my writing in terms of "core emotion," and wasn't surprised to discover the need my protags all share--to belong. Interesting to see how that need manifests in story.
Thanks for sharing!

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